miércoles, 23 de septiembre de 2015

Narrative by Carla 7th grade

Narrative by Carla, 7th grade:

chapter 1

the meeting

One day kelly (a 13 year old girl that goes to Washington High), was at the mall with her friend jenny, and as usual hey were shopping. They bumped into some Preston High students and they started talking. suddenly, there was a little spark lighting up on kellys and marshalls heart (marshal was a quarterback from preston high). not longer than that, they started dating.

chapter 2

the dating

On sunday, it's marshalls and kelly's week-versary.it is also the night that the football season starts and they know this is going to causetrouble because marshall is playing for the opposite team. But when jenny finds out, she decides to talk to kelly. jenny dosent believes that it was righ to date a preston high student but keely refuses to talk to her.

chapter 3

the season

when kelly and marshall go celebrate to the game , a rough mve it made and one of the players takles marshall and screams - live kelly alone- and runs away.Marshall was confused and so was kelly.

chapter 4

the friendship

Jenny decides to tell kelly the truth and talks to her. She confessed that she had asked one of the player to tackle marshall on purpose because kelly wasn't listening to her.Kelly( being more frustrated than ever ,) did the first thing that popped into her head , to run far away from jenny. far,far away.

chapter 5

the moving

Kelly decides that marshall deserves to know what happened in the field and tells the story, but then pops the idea... of moving. Marshall agrees with kelly and they decide to move … to pennsylvania.Kelly remembers that their other friends Ted and Barney, have a house there and asks them if they could have it for the winter.

chapter 6

the tragic

Surprisingly, week after Kelly and marshall were gone, Kelly came back town, lonely. She had a really sad and depressed face. her X friend jenny, asked if there was anything wrong when kelly confessed , that as for marshall… was dead. it was winter and marshall had caught just a cold, or so they thought. jenny was shocked for the news and tried to do everything to make kelly happy again. including to start dating.

chapter 7

the recovering

kelly was devastated. She started wearing dark colors on her hair and clothes. Jenny was losing hope, what could she do was the question.then she remembered a guy she had met a few days ago and presented him to kelly. And actually, this was the first guy that kelly had interest on. as for his name …… was Ted.
 
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