Narrative by Guillermo 7th grade

Narrative by Guillermo, 7th



Ring, the bell rang. Mickle was late for math. Mr. Arnold yelled at him with no sense. Mickle loved math except when Mr. Arnold thaught. After math, he wanted to commit suicide. He hates school now for no reason. Mickle, at recess met a Susan, a chinese girl. Mickle liked Susan. HE was shy to ask her name. But later in science class, Susan came to Mickle and asked his name. Ms. Isabel divided in groups of 2, Mickle got to sit next to Susan, after science, Mickle gave his phone number to Susan. After school Susan called Mickle and asked “do you want to be my boyfriend?” Mickle said “yes”. But his father heard him. mickle’s dad hated chinese and susan is chinese so he needed to lie to his dad. So he said she was scottish. So susan and mickle had a problem being together. they did everything they liked until parent meeting, then susan’s dad met mickle’s dad and susan’s dad asked ‘’are you mickle’s dad?’’ he said yes so mickle got in big trouble because susans dad was chinese so that meant that susan is chinese, and also no one knew his name except him because he was new. mickle talked with his dad for 10 hours but he couldn’t convince him. his dad was really angry and they left the school, susan was never happy again

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