Narrative by Megumi 7th grade

Narrative by Megumi, 7th grade:

There was a man named John in New York and he was a game creator. One day when he was creating a game, one of the characters which was an alien that John called Zibby became alive. Since then, they were close friends.

Two weeks later…

Because Zibby was an alien, he found out through telepathy that a UFO was coming to the Earth to kidnap some humans and take over the Earth. Zibby told John; and, together they went to meet the President of the USA. But the President thought that Zibby was a spy; and, he ordered the police to put Zibby in jail. But the President had his doubts.

Anyway, John knew how to get Zibby out of jail using a game that he created himself. So, together they went to the airport to wait for the spaceship. When they were waiting, the President came to apologize and to bring the armies to fight against the aliens. So Zibby told the armies the weak points of the aliens which were their black dots on their forehead.

After that, when the aliens came out of the spaceship; the armies pointed at these spots shooting them at once. So none of the aliens survived. The President accepted Zibby to be with John later. Because the Earth had been saved by their work. World peace was established.

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Narrative by Emilio 7th grade

Narrative written by Emilio 7th grade.

Once upon a time in a school far far away it was a new school year and a start of a war. Let me start from the beginning.

When 6th grade met 5th grade at recess 5th graders were mostly old timers and 6th grade were mostly new to the school. so 5th grade think they were better and started throwing rocks at 6th grade. 6th grade told the teacher. the teacher spoke to them, but they didn’t stop. So 6th grade threw rocks back and that continued during all recess.

Next day 6th grade decided to bring guns to use against 5th grade if they threw rocks again, like the day before. they did, but 5th grade didit this time with guns so 6th grade got the guns too and school was evacuated. 5th and 6th grade didn’t leave perhaps; they continued fighting for a lot of days.

One day 5th grade sent a peace message to 6th grade. 6th grade asept but they went to their base with a lot of guards with guns for security.

They made peace after all. the school was reopened and 6th and 5th grade and all the school live in peace for ever.

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Narrative Entry by Josemaría 7th grade

Narrative based on "War of the Classes" written by Josemaría 7th grade.

President Obama are you sure? Yes, we need Europe and Russia to help us. Roger that sir, I am contacting all the countries . Remember Christian the offer. Hey honey where have you been?

At the office with Christian, Michelle. We are in trouble we need rice. Our economy depends on it.

Michelle, I am so sorry but I need to sleep.

Mr. Xijinping we hacked a call from the White House going somewhere in Europe. We only have few words. Tell me now! ‘Here from the White House to comunicate all countries of Europe to

PRPRPRPRPRPRPPRPPPP that is now or never. Please comunicate with us if PRRPPRPPRPRPRPRPRPRRRRR. Thats it! I know for a fact that they want to unite, but we need to figure for what and why. What do we dosir? Prepare all the soldiers we have for a upcoming war.

The days passed as the to big countries have an idea of a war and the United States haven’t attacked. Did we got permission? Yes sir. So tell the other countries that we are going to start a war.

Weeks passed and China is at the brinck of destruction and they look for help. Mr. Xijinping we need the help of South America for help. Then South America made a peace treaty accorrding China would give rice for patatoes.

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