Narrative by Megumi 7th grade

Narrative by Megumi, 7th grade:

There was a man named John in New York and he was a game creator. One day when he was creating a game, one of the characters which was an alien that John called Zibby became alive. Since then, they were close friends.

Two weeks later…

Because Zibby was an alien, he found out through telepathy that a UFO was coming to the Earth to kidnap some humans and take over the Earth. Zibby told John; and, together they went to meet the President of the USA. But the President thought that Zibby was a spy; and, he ordered the police to put Zibby in jail. But the President had his doubts.

Anyway, John knew how to get Zibby out of jail using a game that he created himself. So, together they went to the airport to wait for the spaceship. When they were waiting, the President came to apologize and to bring the armies to fight against the aliens. So Zibby told the armies the weak points of the aliens which were their black dots on their forehead.

After that, when the aliens came out of the spaceship; the armies pointed at these spots shooting them at once. So none of the aliens survived. The President accepted Zibby to be with John later. Because the Earth had been saved by their work. World peace was established.

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